Action

I am at a standstill writing Twilight Dance, because I want the action to be fast paced.

I know when I am reading, I want to feel the action. If it is slow paced, I sometimes zone out and that is not good. I don't want the readers to zone out.

So how do I get that fast pace that I like in others stories to translate into my own writing?

Well, that is what I am working on. Maybe, when I get that part written, my fellow writers in the group can help me to achieve that goal.

So, I guess I'll just keep writing.