I haven't been writing much since completing half of my 50,000 words of Full Moon in November. I couldn't get back into the swing of things. I didn't even critique for the Flashxrs yahoo group much.
Finally, thanks to Mike S. and the Writers and Poets on Painters Challenge, I am back. I wrote my story for the painting that seemed to me had a story to tell. Of course, I picked a dark and ominous one. Perfect for my newest vampire flash fiction story.
Today I wrote a piece for Sunday's Flashxr prompt and a Haiku for a challenge by Kim S. on ycitywriters.com.
Here is my Haiku... please keep in mind that I don't have a poets heart.
Finally, thanks to Mike S. and the Writers and Poets on Painters Challenge, I am back. I wrote my story for the painting that seemed to me had a story to tell. Of course, I picked a dark and ominous one. Perfect for my newest vampire flash fiction story.
Today I wrote a piece for Sunday's Flashxr prompt and a Haiku for a challenge by Kim S. on ycitywriters.com.
Here is my Haiku... please keep in mind that I don't have a poets heart.
Mother and Child
Happily child runs.
Child trips and falls down crying.
Safe in mother's bosom.
by Rita L. Smith
2 comments:
that was truely nicely expressed
adverbs are best avoided in fiction and in poetry, particularly the common ones
Post a Comment